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Everfree part 69en by jeremy3 Everfree part 69en by jeremy3
As usual, if you find english mistake, please tell my, I will make the change as soon as I can.
Thousand Thanks to  snoopystallion.deviantart.com/  mustlovefrogs.deviantart.com/ phoenixflambe.deviantart.com/ and firefanatic.deviantart.com/ for the help.:) (Smile) 


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:iconajr001:
AJR001 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2017
Looks like the RNG of Cloudy was high that time... ^^;
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:iconfotland42:
fotland42 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2017
It.
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:iconnovemberlilly:
NovemberLilly Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2017
GET IT DERPY! GEEET IIIITTTTT!!!!!!!!
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:icondarthwill3:
DarthWill3 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well, that's gotta hurt.
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:iconarccahlon:
ArcCahlon Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
now it's time to pay cloudy you are big and bad picking on foals now lets see how you do against derpy
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:iconmaverickwolfzx:
Maverickwolfzx Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
WASTED
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:iconsigel4ever:
sigel4ever Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Student General Artist
critical hit!
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:iconelement0fkindness:
Element0fKindness Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
BLACK HAWK DOWN!!!  I repeat, BLACK HAWK DOWN!!!!
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:iconfirefanatic:
firefanatic Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Panel 2, try "the faster it becomes".
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:iconjeremy3:
jeremy3 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
Done, thank you!:) (Smile) 
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:iconrocuevas:
ROCuevas Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
Very intense it is.
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:iconcoora:
Coora Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
Prepare yourself Cloudy, for DEATH BY DERPY :iconderpyangryplz: 
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:iconsuperiorspider-pup45:
superiorspider-pup45 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
She's gonna kick his butt!
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:iconcoora:
Coora Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
MLP Derpy Emoticon Gif : Do clouds have butts?
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:iconsuperiorspider-pup45:
superiorspider-pup45 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Student Traditional Artist
Sans icon - Cool: Yeah that's where the rains comes out of. (bum bum crash!)

(Sorry that was a crud and bad pun =P (Razz))
 
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:iconcoora:
Coora Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
:iconhappyderpyplz: : Heeheehee!
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:iconphoenixflambe:
PhoenixFlambe Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
In panel 4, one of her names doesn't have a capital 'D' where it should.

That cloud is getting on my nerves.
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:iconjeremy3:
jeremy3 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
Thank you so much.:) (Smile) 
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:iconphuocthiencreation:
PhuocThienCreation Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
In the moment I suddenly think that Cloudy did all this just to makes Scootaloo can fly...
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:iconjeremy3:
jeremy3 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
Oh, Cloudy for some reason just feel anger at this moment:) (Smile) .
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:iconphuocthiencreation:
PhuocThienCreation Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
yes, not anymore when I saw him dares to zap my Scootaloo! >:(
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:iconmustlovefrogs:
MustLoveFrogs Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Professional General Artist
"Where are your friends?"

Also,"come in my hooves" is a bit clumsy. How about "hold on to me" or "let me carry you"?
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:iconjeremy3:
jeremy3 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
Thank you so much.:) (Smile) 
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:iconoverbear:
Overbear Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
We are about to watch Derpy open a whole can of woop-plot
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:iconsnoopystallion:
SnoopyStallion Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
called it XD fast food XD

and isnt it " Where are your friends" ?
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:iconjeremy3:
jeremy3 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017
correction done, thanks.:) (Smile) 
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:iconkartoffelkamm:
Kartoffelkamm Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
DERPY SMASH!!! :)
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:icontwylite-sparkle:
Twylite-Sparkle Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Horseapple!
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:icondingopatagonico:
DingoPatagonico Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
" ow  "
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